Early thursday morning huge crowd had gathered near Ram Milan
Mithaiwala's shop at the Kacchi
Mitti lane. The Kacchi Mitti
lane has been famous since the British Era for it boasted of selling
agricultural products.Kachi mitti sold
everything that came directly from the soil and so the name "Kachhi
Mitti". Right from soil to pesticides , vegetables to grains, fruits and pulses Kachi Mitti had
it all. People would flock in from villages and other states to get agricultural products at a cheaper wholesale
value. But this thursday it was different. People had gathered in numbers and were pushing each other to have a glance .Some
said it was a hit and run accident case.
Some gossiped it was a cold blooded murder. Some were asking to get in the
police .Some rushed in to get the ambulance. The victim had succumbed to injuries. Some were
trying to stay away fearing the interrogation. Everyone around were clueless.
Anuj was in a hurry. He was late by minutes today. He
avoided the crowd. The pleas for help fell on his deaf ears. He was in a hurry
to reach the bus stop.
He would daily arrive
in at the exact time at the bus stop hoping to see her.
She would be there exactly at the same time to catch her bus
to college
She was beautiful, attractive and graceful. She had those
soft curls touching her soft cheeks
Her hair would fall on her face when she would smile and
laugh.
She had the most beautiful eyes ever he had seen. Her eyes
had a hundred tales to narrate.
She would carry a hand woven satin peacock blue bag ,and it
just added more elegance to her persona. She had a penchant for multicoloured
glass bangles and they would make the clinking sound everytime she tried to tuck
her locks of hair behind the ears.
She would be waiting
whenever he would rush in to the stop. He craved for a glimpse of her everyday . He would be mesmerised and lost in
her till the bus took her away.
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She would look at him and smile at times. He seemed to be
lost in the chaotic crowd. He knew he was madly in love with her.
The world was always a noisy place for him but he found
solace in her.
Thursday too was the same for Anuj. He came in rushing to see her. She was no where to be found. He crossed the road
and went to the bus stop and waited for an hour but she was no where to be
found. By this time the crowd near the
Ram Milan Mithai stores had dispersed.The
victim's body had been rushed to the hospital.
Her bus came in at the usual time ,picked up the passengers
and left.
He was dejected.
Hoping to see her
again the next day he walked back again
the Kachi Mitti lane .
On his way back, his eyes fell on something on the road.
The peacock coloured bag soaked in blood laid scattered on
the road with books and pages strewn all around.
The colourful bangles all broken into pieces surrounded the
bag. They had stopped clinking forever
And the world was
silent again!!!
This left an impact in shortness. Sad, but life is such. Well narrated. ATB for BAT, and welcome to BAT as well :) The participation count should be 01 right? :D
ReplyDelete@Leo : am glad u liked it....and regardiing that count thing i thought we are supposed to write about the referrer bloggers count so i wrote 10 :P
DeleteA sad story... nice message you've given.. it's never a waste of time when you try and help others... saves lives..unknown & precious !
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@whispering silence: i hope people learn something from this story and help out every victim of road accidents,rap etc.Coz it could be someone you know.
DeleteIt's a poignant way of putting the message across... it struck all the right chords! Lovely writing. Good luck for BAT :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Guria ...Am glad you liked it.. and i hope i find a place for myself in BAT
Deletea very gripping and poignant post . . we are always in a hurry to satisfy our needs that most of the times we forget to see the tears of the person sitting next to us . .
ReplyDeleteThanks malini ... am so happy people are liking it... and i hope this story is an eye opener for every person...
Deleteawwwww .... poor lil thing .. you knw such cases r so rampant ... :( good narration
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hehe.. yeah such cases are so frequent and people still dont pay heed.. am glad u liked it :)
DeleteA colorful story I must say. Good one ! ATB for the BAT
ReplyDeletethanks maverick :)
Deleteliked the narration...atb
ReplyDeletethanks chetan :)
DeleteVery sad for Anuj. Were they meant to form a bond in near future? We'll never know. Perhaps not... given the situation.
ReplyDeletevery well written. I liked the description of the lane you gave initially. Is there a place like that?
@Kshitij : thanks am glad u liked it.No there is no place like that....Just a figment of my imagination :)
DeleteKeep reading !!
Probably I already knew the whole story or ending, but still, it a good attempt to capture the emotions and the longingness in words. Crisp and smooth read :)
ReplyDeleteBdw welcome to BAT :)
@Adreamygal : i wanted to spread a message via a short story ...And i am happy i could make atleast one person happy out of it :)
DeleteThough the end is somewhat predictable, it is indeed a good read.. and it carries a valuable message. a neat narration. all the best.. :-)
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@ARat :thanku so much ... am happy u liked it.. hope to make the future stories unpredictable :)
DeleteLife can be so uncertain. The story ran on predictable lines but ended abruptly.
ReplyDeleteBest of luck for BAT!
Thanku for ur wishes :)
Deletehmm i knew that coming but it was too good C. You write well :)
ReplyDeletethanks tsw :)
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