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Silence amidst us leaves me smothered
The disturbing calm engulfs the peace of my mind
I see the distances increasing amidst us
When you say nothing at all...
Days when you would mumble
Silence amidst us leaves me smothered
The disturbing calm engulfs the peace of my mind
I see the distances increasing amidst us
When you say nothing at all...
Days when you would mumble
sweet nothings
Those cozy moments, those mushy talks
I end up thinking of those endless conversations
When you say nothing at all.....
Things have changed, times have changed
Lonely Supper times, Lonely dinner times
It hurts , it pains , it drives me insane
When you say nothing at all....
Words now have lost its meaning
Gestures now Go unseen and unnoticed
My Love,I crave For Those Endless Blabber
When you say nothing at all.....
Want To Battle Out This Unnerving Void
I now Long For Those Silly Fights,
To Reinstate The Torn Threads Of Our Love
When you say nothing at all....
Those cozy moments, those mushy talks
I end up thinking of those endless conversations
When you say nothing at all.....
Things have changed, times have changed
Lonely Supper times, Lonely dinner times
It hurts , it pains , it drives me insane
When you say nothing at all....
Words now have lost its meaning
Gestures now Go unseen and unnoticed
My Love,I crave For Those Endless Blabber
When you say nothing at all.....
Want To Battle Out This Unnerving Void
I now Long For Those Silly Fights,
To Reinstate The Torn Threads Of Our Love
When you say nothing at all....
Beautiful verses..:-)
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Deleteoh how lovely it is. The element of estranged love often ends in words like these. A wonderful poem :)
ReplyDeleteRicha
I couldnt agree more with you.. Love sometimes takes a strange course ....
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DeleteVoid is a serious problem not only in relationships but in life too... Well, nature abhors vacuum and yet...
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Thankies remote gate.. glad u liked it :)
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