I wish someone still told me
I was still beautiful
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Those artistic eyes , Those soft lips,
Those rosy cheeks ,
Those arched brow
Now tell a tale of sorrow
Those pretty smiles , Have gone away miles
They no longer adorn my face, they no longer add to the
grace.
I wish someone still told me
I was still beautiful
Worried to walk out alone, All I can remember is my moan and
groans
Covered in a veil, my face all weak and pale
Thousand faces my eyes meet, but no one bothers to greet.
My face scares them off, all they do is taunt and scoff.
Do I deserve a life like this....
I wish someone still told me this
That ,“I was still beautiful”
Wherever I go no respite for my woe
Same people and the same questions I find
The world around me is blind and unkind
They can no longer see
What it feels to be
me.
I wish someone had the eyes to see
The beauty behind the scars in me
I wish someone still told me this
“I was still beautiful”
I wish someone had the eyes to see
ReplyDeleteThe beauty behind the scars in me
I wish someone still told me this
“I was still beautiful”
totally loved the last lines.. lovely!! :)
@Sangitha : thank u so so much.. am happy u liked it :)
ReplyDeletepoignant
ReplyDeleteyou brought out the essence pretty well and hope the message spreads wide and your beautiful (beauty of) lines too.
jus loved it.. awesome one.. :)
ReplyDeleteAm glad u liked it shruti.keep reading
DeleteThanks satish. I too hope d message spreads wide:)
ReplyDeleteThat was amazing I'm a huge fan of poetry
ReplyDeleteThanks Jordan .I am glad u liked it
ReplyDeleteAwesome!
ReplyDeleteThanku roshan.glad u liked it :)
DeleteLovely poem and equally beautiful blog theme! Keep it up, beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteThanku indianaddivas.glad to kno u liked it :)
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ReplyDeletethanks rah :)
Deletelovely poem...
ReplyDelete@nch : thanku ... am glad u liked it :)
DeleteSuch honest & true poem in terms of words and feelings.!
ReplyDeleteEven I wish someone had the eyes to see the beauty behind the scars in me..
Good Luck.. Keep writing.. Stay Blessed :)
Thanks Sparkling Aura
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